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Happy Birthday Poem To You

Poetry is, of course, highly personal in many cases, and, so it should be. Thankfully there's still something out there where people aren't scared to be honest and make themselves a bit vulnerable. Really, I feel a dangerous digression coming on, but, you know, sometimes it gets disturbing when I think about how much some people are just out to protect themselves. Well, I encourage you to take your armor off once in a while, but, as I always say, what do I know anyway?

Seriously, though, giving a loved one a poem for a birthday is pretty deep. You can write the poem right on the card, and, you know, I'm not suggesting that this is a substitute for a gift! Our loved ones still love receiving iPods and cell phones and HP PDAs (hint, hint : ) ). But, the birthday poem can really communicate your deeper feelings, and I encourage everyone to give it a try. Consistent with my general artistic philosophy, if you've read any of my work, you'll know that I don't think having talent is the most important thing, anyway, when it comes to artistic creation. I say, "The process is its own reward." So, in other words, make paintings or write birthday poems or funny poems or even lousy love poems because the process of creating the piece is so enjoyable.. just like the reason you go for a bike ride or swim across the river... okay, moving right along to the birthday poems.

Let's start off with one by Ted Kooser. What I like about this poem is its subtly. We can obviously see that Mr. Kooser titled it A Birthday Poem; yet, in the piece, he's not hitting you over the head with a birthday cake, and that's a good thing! : )

A Birthday Poem
Just past dawn, the sun stands
with its heavy red head
in a black stanchion of trees,
waiting for someone to come
with his bucket
for the foamy white light,
and then a long day in the pasture.
I too spend my days grazing,
feasting on every green moment
till darkness calls,
and with the others
I walk away into the night,
swinging the little tin bell
of my name.

Ted Kooser

Okay, you can click the link to see more of Mr. Kooser's work. All right, now to my birthday poems for two special ladies (one of whom is a bit older than the other! :) ) So, this first one's for...hang on, I've got to find the paper. I was writing it out last night, and, at the moment, there's papers everywhere along with empty bottles of S. Pellegrino (don't want to lose the blog feel = insert plenty of trivial details no one is interested in; and, yet, the blogger seems to assume people are, which, in my view, gets to the heart of the humor of so many blogs, ie. unintentional!) okay, just a second.. Okay, this first one's for Lenpa.

Birthday Haiku

Yesterday's yellow
She's saved my life a few times
Dream with the candles

Okay, this next one's for my daughter, who's turning two. I wrote this one a few months back, and I was trying to write something new, but, I couldn't write anything which I liked more than this poem, which is one of my favorites of the thousands I've written over the past 16 years.

Sky Threatening

Gray gradients
Behind cauliflower
Blotches strutting

The gray plate
Gyrating--
And orange-lime

Limes and oranges
Tree line jags
Somebody's hill

And tree line
Behind tree line
Infinity (the rain

will sound like
a train)
Saying infinity

Towards thingdom
Of heavens
As little oil's

Spots appear
My feet
Walking how

My crease's
Shoulders not
Being wet.

All my everything
Efforts amount
Oil puddle

About horrendous
Failure except, you,
Little rose--

I am magical
Enough for
Raindrop walking?

Copyright Kemal Faruquee 2005

Happy birthday little one. love, daddy. 11/12/2005

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